Sunday, February 8, 2009

Introduction for Paper 1

While the weather outside may be dire, there is no better way to spend that free time than on Second Life. Just think of the many opportunities on which we miss out and cannot do because of inclement weather. Sometimes, people sit at their homes twiddling their thumbs being bored because they do not want to get out of the house and experience an action-packed day. Rather than be bored, all we have to do is log on to our computer and explore the entertainment possibilities in Second Life. Entertainment within a virtual world, such as attending sporting events, going to dance clubs, and even visiting science museums can be an engaging experience in Second Life.

1 comment:

  1. pretty good joe...take out "the" in front of "inclement weather"...also revise "encountering boredom"...awkward...also, revise the sentence Rather than be bored to death......" the sentence is a bit awkward...restructure it to make it less awkward...the entertainment possibilities in Second Life...the rest is good...send me your revised into asap via email...

    dr. c

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