Extra Credit Paper 1

I took my paper to the Writing Lab and Rachel Brown proofread and edited my paper.

Introduction for Paper 1

While the weather outside may be dire, there is no better way to spend that free time than on Second Life. Just think of the many opportunities on which we miss out and cannot do because of inclement weather. Sometimes, people sit at their homes twiddling their thumbs being bored because they do not want to get out of the house and experience an action-packed day. Rather than be bored, all we have to do is log on to our computer and explore the entertainment possibilities in Second Life. Entertainment within a virtual world, such as attending sporting events, going to dance clubs, and even visiting science museums can be an engaging experience in Second Life.

Topic and Thesis Statement for Paper 1

The topic for my paper is Entertainment. The following is my Thesis Statement: Entertainment within in a virtual world, such as attending sporting events, going to dance clubs, and even visiting science museums can be an engaging experience in Second Life.